what do you think of the song i wrote?

people tell me my songs are to repetitive is this song and what would
you rate it from 1 to 10

heres the song

Thinking about you

Thinking about you and all your lies
Thinking about the times make me cry
You made me die inside
My love to you is a game
You don't care about my pain
The lies
The tears
When you broke my heart
I love you
And I still do
You just had to break my heart
They say love is art
You broke the canvas
You tore it to shreds
I might as well be dead
I think about you
All the lies
All the times you made me cry
I can't take any more of these times
You're a cheater
I can't believe what you did
How can I love you even after this?
All the bad memories you gave me
They will go to my grave
I don't want any more bad memories
(With you at least)
I just want to break free
The lies
The pain
I want it all gone
No more sadness
Its time to take no more lies
You won't make me cry any more
Time to say good bye to the tears
Now heres the hardest part
Time to say good bye
Time to be free
Here we go now
Good bye
I still love you though

were you surprised by the meaning of the song and if you didnt find
out the meaning is a guy who finds out his girl friend is lying
cheating so he has to breaks up with her but he still loves her